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1. French scientists reported that the same kind of deep brain stimulation which used to cure some patients for Parkinson's disease helped a few patients who suffered from obsessive-compulsive disorder(OCD).
2. Also, the patients of OCD have special habits such has repeatedly washing their hands or check on something again and again.
3. I can roughly imagine how hard to overcome cancer and its patients are undergoing difficult time
4. All patients implanted pacemakers, similar to a heart pacemaker, in their chests and connected to electrodes inserted into their brains.
5. Currently, serious side effects can cause medical conflicts.
6. She advises that cancer patient should try to keep their emotion, and then concentrate on other things such as focusing on themselves or taking care of their family.
7. Furthermore, the writer of this article has overcome breast cancer and she is also a doctor, for these reasons, her advice will be extremely useful to the cancer survivors.
8. The most important thing is that they should have a strong mental power and keep their mind in stable, not be influenced by unhelpful information.
9. We are seriously affected by the US and that's why there have been a lot of forecasts in Korea after the election day of the US.
10. In addition, they worry about Obama's protectionist attitude because our economy is strongly influenced by that of the US and his policy might make our economy suffer from new barriers.
11. They are also hopeful about economy because Obama will cope with the current economic situation.
12. a lot of middle-class Americans don't know their neighbor's the really terrible poverty that they can't image of.
13. If they see the reality of grinding poverty, they couldn't believe their witness.
14. The Kansas city center for children, Operation Breakthrough, made and has run a tour program to get people to meet a poor person and see.
15. most of the minorities and the poors have high expectations about Barack's triumph.
16. Foreign aid can result in delaying democracy instead improving one’s economy. In most developing countries, feudalism that stands for feudal elites and big landowners, can be the reason of hindrance for building democracy.
17. Despite of its trial and attempt for it, some countries under specific political, economic and cultural situations have failed.