peer eding to Chris

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Your composition is well organized into introduction, body and conclusion. Also you give the appropriate examples to each supportive sentence. This essay tells the story in a objective way.

If you consider some expressions that I point out, it will be a perfect composion.

It seems that active voice is appropriate for this sentence below.
"they are consisted of some types like "
Also, I prefer to use "relationship" instead of "relations". Regarding of expresson "past relations" you have to add specific person or situation like "with ...."
In my oponion, "under stress of something" is more popular than "get stress for somthing"
How about changing "one out of home and work" to "one of the two, home and work"
At the end of essay, I can understand what you want to say, but it will bebbetter to use other expression instead of
"but we can sit down at poorly done results at work."